Pumpkin soup-worst food Ewwwww. Pumpkin soup!!! It all started when my mum Was making pumpkin soup I could hear her blending it With a blender. (Ewwwwwwwwwww) I say to myself in my head With a disgusted look rolling over my face. I could just picture Me throwing up on the table. As dinner came my Mum brought the soup over to the nicely set table. My Mum, Dad, sister, brother and Me were sitting in our usual spots And Dad pours soup for everyone. I start to say disgusting Things about the soup like: this looks disgusting or ewwwwwwww! Or I hate pumpkin soup my mum looks at me and says just eat a little and your done and I say can I make my own food. Please! I hate pumpkin soup!!! I say out loud. My hole family looks at me in annoyed faces. THE END
Hi Isla, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. Your similes are very good I especially like the dog working out at the gym one, it is very creative. You could try using different people or objects for your similes like yourself or a tree. Isla is as sweet as cake or the door was as squeaky as a mouse.
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nui,
Zana Yates